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At Peace (a haiku)
tiny petals fall
still ponds near pleasant pastures
cool breeze on warm skin
placed 3rd in spring/summer haiku competition http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/8320/15/
Published 12th Aug 2015
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12th Aug 2015 6:29pm
12th Aug 2015 10:07pm
Thanks for reading!
This was intended more as a Spring haiku, but, yes, it's ambiguous enough that it could also be about Autumn, which is my favorite season. I wish it wasn't always the shortest!
This was intended more as a Spring haiku, but, yes, it's ambiguous enough that it could also be about Autumn, which is my favorite season. I wish it wasn't always the shortest!
