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I kiss you,
I whisper in your ear.
You ask, "Why do
you try so hard dear?"
It is because
I love you.
In this answer
nothing is new.
Each day I try,
often asking
myself, "why?"
The answer is
still the same,
It is love,
in it no shame.
Each day I give
my heart to you,
Never believing
we are through.
I keep telling myself,
keep trying,
Just will not accept
this love is dying.
It is so hard to
keep believing a lie.
Letting each sign
pass by.
Why is it so
hard to let go?
When the truth
you already know.
That you're the
only one....
clinging on.
Because she knows
her love is
gone.
I whisper in your ear.
You ask, "Why do
you try so hard dear?"
It is because
I love you.
In this answer
nothing is new.
Each day I try,
often asking
myself, "why?"
The answer is
still the same,
It is love,
in it no shame.
Each day I give
my heart to you,
Never believing
we are through.
I keep telling myself,
keep trying,
Just will not accept
this love is dying.
It is so hard to
keep believing a lie.
Letting each sign
pass by.
Why is it so
hard to let go?
When the truth
you already know.
That you're the
only one....
clinging on.
Because she knows
her love is
gone.
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Re. Over
11th Aug 2015 9:19pm
Quite a sombre and sad piece. You can feel the pain in this but also the resignation in the last stanza,that it is over for her. It is hard thing to accept when one can carry such deep love for someone who doesn't reciprocate. It's a real mind fuck.
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Re: Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 1:37am
Thanks for the read sweetheart. It is so very
hard to let go when you have loved someone for
so long. k2m
hard to let go when you have loved someone for
so long. k2m
Re. Over
11th Aug 2015 9:41pm
Oh...this is tender, brief and beautiful. They short stanzas contribute to the total desperation of the poem. Feel this to the core.
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Re: Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 1:40am
Thank you so much for taking time to give me a read.
I very appreciate the comments and I am looking
forward to seeing some of your ink.
I very appreciate the comments and I am looking
forward to seeing some of your ink.
Anonymous
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Re: Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 1:47am
Dear Taryn, I assure you I am not your
husband or anyone else who knows you.
We just have some similar situations
going on. Life is a bitch, but I keep trying.
Thanks for the read, love.
Keith
husband or anyone else who knows you.
We just have some similar situations
going on. Life is a bitch, but I keep trying.
Thanks for the read, love.
Keith
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2015 11:17pm
I feel the sadness of forcing a smile, the kiss on a turned-away cheek and the bleakness of the day, trudging to the office. Always cloudy, bleak and drissling, even if others feel th warmth of the sun.

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Re: Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 1:58am
Well, Mr. Derrick, you seem to be well
versed in my particular agony.
I write to heal and it helps
to let it out.
Thanks for always finding the time
to read and comment Sir.
k2m
versed in my particular agony.
I write to heal and it helps
to let it out.
Thanks for always finding the time
to read and comment Sir.
k2m
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12th Aug 2015 00:02am
Re: Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 2:01am
Well Sweetheart, thanks for dropping by in my time of need.
I always look forward to your comments and kind words.
Keith
I always look forward to your comments and kind words.
Keith
Re. Over
12th Aug 2015 10:31pm
Dammit and sniffles, misters Keith.. you get hugs cuz ..goddammit, this one *hurt* ;(
your heart is golden m'dears!
~*From this...
"I keep telling myself,
keep trying,
Just will not accept
this love is dying."
~*to THIS...
"..When the truth
you already know..."
&
"That you're the
only one....
clinging on... "
~just pure feelings. love!
very poignant write.. am still highly affected by the outstanding emotion you've captured.
~d
your heart is golden m'dears!
~*From this...
"I keep telling myself,
keep trying,
Just will not accept
this love is dying."
~*to THIS...
"..When the truth
you already know..."
&
"That you're the
only one....
clinging on... "
~just pure feelings. love!
very poignant write.. am still highly affected by the outstanding emotion you've captured.
~d
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Re: Re. Over
13th Aug 2015 3:31am
Thanks sweetheart it easy to
write when you you live.
the material. I really appreciate
You stopping by. :)
Keith
write when you you live.
the material. I really appreciate
You stopping by. :)
Keith
Re. Over
16th Oct 2015 4:15am
moving, painful and brimming with emotions...some skill to encapsulate in such few words Sir!!
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