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Be Careful What You Wish For
I shall seek out the "perfect woman"—
She who far exceeds the norm.
A divine feminine incarnation;
A goddess in face and form.
The image I envision
Is transcendent in every respect;
Her stunning appearance is only surpassed
By her towering intellect.
She’ll be spirited, modest, carnal, demure,
Artistic, logical, brave—
And any who try to misuse her will find
They've gained far more grief than they gave.
Preparing to launch my determined quest,
One small hiccup I do foresee—
Should I find such a “Juno-come-to-Earth”
—What the hell would she want with me?
Published 31st Jul 2015
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 9:27pm
Love it! Don't I know the feeling. Good writing.
31st Jul 2015 9:51pm
Thanks... Moths to a flame, that's the closest comparison I can come up with. :D
1st Aug 2015 2:03pm
I love the poem, the words so expressive and beautifully creative.
But I kinda find the title not connecting to the poem.
I would give you applause for how poignant your poetic pen is.
But I kinda find the title not connecting to the poem.
I would give you applause for how poignant your poetic pen is.
1st Aug 2015 4:02pm
5th Jan 2016 10:36am
Ha! I got a kick out of both the piece and the pic you chose to accompany it.
