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Summer
sunbaked my flesh congeals
my thoughts sink like lead
in gelatinous pools
lumping together
cellulitic masses
crusted blister boil
burst bright and sizzle
evaporating fire
my thoughts sink like lead
in gelatinous pools
lumping together
cellulitic masses
crusted blister boil
burst bright and sizzle
evaporating fire
Published 30th Jul 2015
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7th Aug 2015 3:48am
Normally I think of my thoughts forming words and trailing across my skin...
But for sure I can relate, to those days when it's sooo hot
Thoughts can't even take off. Though I had to laugh at thoughts becoming cellulite, betraying their creator. Nothing but blisters!
But for sure I can relate, to those days when it's sooo hot
Thoughts can't even take off. Though I had to laugh at thoughts becoming cellulite, betraying their creator. Nothing but blisters!
Irritated and
so hot - even fine words seem
listless and ugly
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