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Descent To Death
Hang over me by the noose around your neck
groaning despair into a sinister symphony
wooing me into a hypnotic state of dread
leaching my soul like a deadly parasite
Sing to me in words like whispers
pierce my eyes so I only see as you see
blind to the light I'm condemned to the darkness
entombed by the wrath gnawing me alive
Cruor sticks to the bath I drown in
viscera removed violently one by one
my heart is torn from my silent body
a lonely concave between mutilated ribs
Published 26th Jul 2015
| Edited 27th Jul 2015
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7th Jun 2016 4:53pm
Really enjoyed the amount of imagery and the way you were able to paint a picture with this one. Very dark and unnerving but still fluid all the way through nice ink, keep it up.
Cheers,
19xx
Cheers,
19xx
8th Jun 2016 3:59pm
Thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed this poem and were able to picture the scene in your mind as you read it :)
