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Carve my flesh
I can see, your disease, so pathetic it makes my eyes bleed. Since u punctured my flesh, my mind will not rest, my god the memories still so fucking fresh.
I can't see, the things u see, so disgusted I want to be the reason ur deceased. I feel so fucking dirty, jus barely 13, a lifetime waiting, haunting every fucking dream.
Fuck u little man, can u understand, sadistic rage takes me by the hand. The anger has built inside, run but u can't hide, from the truth that will result in ur demise.
I can see, u next to me, cold and blue death takes ur body. I can't deny, I want u to die, suffer through till the end, I killed u tonight.
I can't see, the things u see, so disgusted I want to be the reason ur deceased. I feel so fucking dirty, jus barely 13, a lifetime waiting, haunting every fucking dream.
Fuck u little man, can u understand, sadistic rage takes me by the hand. The anger has built inside, run but u can't hide, from the truth that will result in ur demise.
I can see, u next to me, cold and blue death takes ur body. I can't deny, I want u to die, suffer through till the end, I killed u tonight.
Published 24th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2015 6:22pm
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4th Aug 2015 6:54pm
I appreciate the passion and anger in this piece.
I would honestly say that the use of "U" and "UR" severely diminishes the beauty of the piece, though. I would recommend using proper spellings and line breaks to give the piece more potency.
I would honestly say that the use of "U" and "UR" severely diminishes the beauty of the piece, though. I would recommend using proper spellings and line breaks to give the piece more potency.
