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elephants
The eloquent eloquence of elephants
Is knowingly known and renowned
They trumpety trump like trumpets
Sounding out soundworthy sounds
Published 22nd Jul 2015
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Lol... I heard yer words so loud and quite clear, but ye need not blow your own horn with the rest of us already here.
23rd Jul 2015 11:17am
Are you calling me an Elephant ?????
it's ok really Elephants are good people :-)
thanks for reading and commenting :-)
it's ok really Elephants are good people :-)
thanks for reading and commenting :-)
22nd Jul 2015 6:34am
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23rd Jul 2015 11:19am
I think you may need to see your GP and get a prescription for 20mg of DiazaPUN
:-)
:-)
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2015 1:22pm
this made me smile on this somewhat dreary morning! love it!
23rd Jul 2015 11:20am
Cool :-) - I like to make people smile because that then makes me smile :-)
22nd Jul 2015 9:31pm
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2015 00:10am
Love this David...brings a smile to my face and a little chuckle.... 😉
4th Aug 2015 7:41pm
26th Jul 2015 2:17am
This made me laugh. :) May we all aspire as poets to go on "sounding out soundworthy sounds." ;) My only critique would be to make it longer.
4th Aug 2015 7:42pm
I am working on it :-)
thank you fro reading and enjoying this piece :-)
thank you fro reading and enjoying this piece :-)
4th Aug 2015 4:23pm
Elephants are my creatures ☺ i think theyd be happy to be represented by your poem
4th Aug 2015 7:43pm
I would be proud to be a representative for elephants
so glad you read and enjoyed :-)
so glad you read and enjoyed :-)
29th Aug 2015 12:25pm
There's nothing so quite magnificent as an elephant, and the ways in which they communicate go beyond what many of think we know.
Love the alliteration.
Love the alliteration.
29th Aug 2015 4:09pm
thank you for reading and your kind comments :-)
I too love the Majestic elephant :-)
I too love the Majestic elephant :-)
Anonymous
14th Apr 2019 7:34pm
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14th Apr 2019 8:49pm
I am ecstatic
Such a positive critique How did I live all my life without these comments in my life?
fuck lord Byron! LMAO
Such a positive critique How did I live all my life without these comments in my life?
fuck lord Byron! LMAO
