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Blue-Eyed Moonshine
I love the sun as it vanishes along the horizon,
leaving a memory to recapture tomorrow.
Much like his sorrow...
which captures my heart like the coolness of the moon.
When soft-spoken words unravel the first night's star, I am captured by the beauty of the fading twilight,
the darkness that lurks within his blue, sparkling eyes.
leaving a memory to recapture tomorrow.
Much like his sorrow...
which captures my heart like the coolness of the moon.
When soft-spoken words unravel the first night's star, I am captured by the beauty of the fading twilight,
the darkness that lurks within his blue, sparkling eyes.
Published 18th Jul 2015
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18th Jul 2015 1:36pm
20th Jul 2015 8:27pm
I consider myself to be a melancholy person, if I'm being honest. But hopeful nonetheless.
Thank you! ☺️
Thank you! ☺️
Nice flow with a very romantically intoxicating feel. Makes me wonder what he feels as he is gazing back into your eyes... jj
20th Jul 2015 8:29pm
Perhaps the same thing, but backwards as my eyes are also blue. Hmmn... curious.
Maybe we could collaborate and you could write back?
Just a thought.
Maybe we could collaborate and you could write back?
Just a thought.
21st Jul 2015 2:39am
That would be nice, but you'll have to put that other blue eyeball back in your head, not in your mouth. I'm definitely not collaborating if you have eyeball pieces in your teeth... lololol
JJ
JJ
21st Jul 2015 6:00am
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20th Jul 2015 8:50am
It's a beautiful fragment in time, yet my mind almost begs a sequel. Perhaps this is what makes it so appealing, the wonder that follows.
20th Jul 2015 8:26pm
This is for the "You Are Perfect" competition.
You're right, maybe I should continue...
Thank you for stopping by!
You're right, maybe I should continue...
Thank you for stopping by!
