deepundergroundpoetry.com
save me
I cant do it
I cant do it alone
I'm in a boat
but I'm sinking
hold me
hold my hand
pull me up
from the water of hell
love me
show me
how it feels
to love
to feel
to care
to be happy
help me please
I cant do it alone
I'm in a boat
but I'm sinking
hold me
hold my hand
pull me up
from the water of hell
love me
show me
how it feels
to love
to feel
to care
to be happy
help me please
Published 17th Jul 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 929
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
19th Jul 2015 7:01am
Who are you asking to save you? Who do you want to love you? What do you need saving from? Yourself or an oppressor?
21st Jul 2015 7:55am
actually those are good questions i want someone to save me and love me and as for who i need saving from the person would be me i need saving from myself
