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Like a Stone
In thoughts of hymn and darling blushes,
eye on a canvas with spoken brushes
displaying the lengths of her long tousled tresses,
standing by the side of the road.
In souls like stars they dwell apart,
fools for love in glistened fraught
there's no place fitting the poet's heart
left standing, tossed like a stone.
eye on a canvas with spoken brushes
displaying the lengths of her long tousled tresses,
standing by the side of the road.
In souls like stars they dwell apart,
fools for love in glistened fraught
there's no place fitting the poet's heart
left standing, tossed like a stone.
Published 26th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 9:15pm
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26th Jun 2015 10:53pm
Beautiful, Pishashee. May I make one suggestion? Say tossed instead of thrown. I love the natural alliteration of it.
No matter, beautiful write.
No matter, beautiful write.
That sounds good. Sometimes I'll use a word because it holds some personal value, but I am always up for suggestions and really appreciate it. Thank you so much :)
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