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mandala ~ petals in the sand
she holds flowers of velvet
plucking the petals carefully
from the bud
sweet scents
permeating her fingers
placing them carefully
creating patterns in the sand
petals, shells, feathers
tranquility
love
peace
the beauty of life
at her fingertips
a swirl of hope...
plucking the petals carefully
from the bud
sweet scents
permeating her fingers
placing them carefully
creating patterns in the sand
petals, shells, feathers
tranquility
love
peace
the beauty of life
at her fingertips
a swirl of hope...
Published 24th Jun 2015
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25th Jun 2015 11:21pm
How peacefully vivid you stitched the words. Was reading and could feel the airs, could feel the grit of sands giving life with frags of hope. A little is better than none at all.
27th Jun 2015 4:32am
Thank You Noire...so glad you could sense the atmosphere of the moment...your thoughts and comments much appreciated...
26th Jun 2015 2:08am
flower petals in the sand, along w/those other bits of beauty & endearments; it's a beautiful way to create art...
27th Jun 2015 4:34am
It is methodic and meditative, and very beautiful, yes...thank you JohnFeddeler, for the read and thoughtful comments...
