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Claws of Mess
Would you mind
~too much~
If I just crawled
into your lap-
Securing myself
against
The steady sway
of your heartbeat?
Bold tick-tock
to wrap me sweet.
Would it be alright
~just now~
If I drown
my insecurities
Within the depths
of your smile?
Sink my fears
deep for awhile?
Would you let me
~for this moment~
Hide myself
'tween your arms
weary for
a solitary caress?
Gentle kitten
claws of mess.
Would you mind
~just now~
Saving triumph
for the dawn
And making love
within an embrace?
Eye to eye
I kiss your face.
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Re: Claws of Mess
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2015 11:21am
*sighs* you make me miss my Papi oh so terribly here [&] his lap [my favourite place in the world]...
"Securing myself
against
The steady sway
of your heartbeat?"
... j'adore j'adore j'adore, cherie
xoxo
"Securing myself
against
The steady sway
of your heartbeat?"
... j'adore j'adore j'adore, cherie
xoxo
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:23am
The moonshine in my eve, you are m'sweet sis!
Omgdss yes!.. the lap is jagged-kitten haven I do agree ;) lovely place to heal.
soft, weary me tonight
kissess & curtsies
~d
Omgdss yes!.. the lap is jagged-kitten haven I do agree ;) lovely place to heal.
soft, weary me tonight
kissess & curtsies
~d
re: nice
23rd Jun 2015 4:25am
Sweet thanx to you for poppin' in!
Alwys all-wayz appreciate the read ;)
be welz & tys
~d
Alwys all-wayz appreciate the read ;)
be welz & tys
~d
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:30am
*Mission Fuzzies to Taryn*.. *A-complished!!
hugs of big-hardest-luvz to you *sqeeezin'
Soft tingles are mine in sleepy kitten mode,
course that's when gals like *us..pounce! lmsao
evenin' grins of thx darlin one!
~d
hugs of big-hardest-luvz to you *sqeeezin'
Soft tingles are mine in sleepy kitten mode,
course that's when gals like *us..pounce! lmsao
evenin' grins of thx darlin one!
~d
Re: Claws of Mess
22nd Jun 2015 6:03pm
It sounds blissfully wonderful except for those kitten claws of mess. Where exactly would that be? I'm allergic to cats so it kinda scares me when I think about the times cats have scratched me. Hmm, I'm reserving my reservations until I find out more about the mess those claws are making and if I'm gonna need to bring allergy medicine... jj
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:40am
Grins to your hesitant pace, JJ m'dears..
nooo worries, the mess is just my fight on the
world these dayz..so far?.. I've been lapped. grzz
just restin' up hun, gets my shine bk soon, it
didn't go far ;) (she sez)
grins n ~d/T
nooo worries, the mess is just my fight on the
world these dayz..so far?.. I've been lapped. grzz
just restin' up hun, gets my shine bk soon, it
didn't go far ;) (she sez)
grins n ~d/T
Re: Claws of Mess
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2015 8:43pm
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:43am
Thanks so much m'friend!
Always love it when you drop by w/sweet visits..
curties of thx & be welz to you ;)
~d
Always love it when you drop by w/sweet visits..
curties of thx & be welz to you ;)
~d
Re: Claws of Mess
22nd Jun 2015 10:20pm
Definitely beautiful.
"If I drown
my insecurities
Within the depths
of your smile?
Sink my fears
deep for while?"
This line hit home run for me☺
"If I drown
my insecurities
Within the depths
of your smile?
Sink my fears
deep for while?"
This line hit home run for me☺
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:47am
No joke there m'dears.. hard times call fer
reassurance in embrace/touch to feel better
sometimes. weary are these days tho, yes?
ty fer always poppin' in fer my fits! lol.
hv a great nite!
~d
reassurance in embrace/touch to feel better
sometimes. weary are these days tho, yes?
ty fer always poppin' in fer my fits! lol.
hv a great nite!
~d
Re: Claws of Mess
22nd Jun 2015 11:46pm
re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 4:56am
Warmest thanx fer the visit, much obliged always..
my dark ink
in curtsy to you..
~d
my dark ink
in curtsy to you..
~d
Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 5:14am
Eye wouldn't mind at all.....but gee, all the competitors you have queue'd up.
Goodness....aye gits dizzy scrolling down to find a spot for my Adorations!
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 5:49am
Egats man!..sent u the *fancy list your at top of!? (Didn't get the memo? ..damn slackin sect-iaries!)
winx dears..you're the best!!
lotsa grins
~d
winx dears..you're the best!!
lotsa grins
~d
re: re: Re: Claws of Mess
24th Jun 2015 3:18am
Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 7:07am
"Would it be alright
~just now~
If I drown
my insecurities
Within the depths
of your smile?
Sink my fears
deep for awhile?" - Ahhhh how I love those lines. Relatable for me.
Extraordinary work, I adore this piece. Thank you for writing and sharing.
~just now~
If I drown
my insecurities
Within the depths
of your smile?
Sink my fears
deep for awhile?" - Ahhhh how I love those lines. Relatable for me.
Extraordinary work, I adore this piece. Thank you for writing and sharing.
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re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 3:03pm
Sweet lady!.. I do-soo appreciate seein' you here!
ty-ty fer the read, I am humbled to smiles ;)
be welz ever m'dear!
~d
ty-ty fer the read, I am humbled to smiles ;)
be welz ever m'dear!
~d
re: Re: Claws of Mess
23rd Jun 2015 3:06pm
Thanks fer the visit hun!..
must send you grins fer reading my pouty days ;)
ty-ty sweetly
~d
must send you grins fer reading my pouty days ;)
ty-ty sweetly
~d
Re: Claws of Mess
re: Re: Claws of Mess
you cud *almost make me blush(not), my sweetest
everloves..but we *both know that bliss fer true.
and.. shud read special..rite into your solace
and wrap u warm as intended.
mwahs on you wif all my soft luvs
~T
everloves..but we *both know that bliss fer true.
and.. shud read special..rite into your solace
and wrap u warm as intended.
mwahs on you wif all my soft luvs
~T
Re: Claws of Mess
28th Jun 2015 00:31am
Would you mind
~too much~
If I just crawled
into your lap-
Securing myself
against
The steady sway
of your heartbeat?
Bold tick-tock
to wrap me sweet.
I long to do this with someone I hold very dear..but can't.You said it PERFECT and while I was reading, I could see myself and him together. If only...Aaahhhhh. Love love love this.
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