deepundergroundpoetry.com
PASSING
Her naked skin
Mottled with lime
Leaf shadows
The lichen still moist
Far from summer sight
Less, least, a lease
Of season passing
Pass the seasoning
One egg
Not beaten
Broken in two
A bottomless bowl
Always open
So never
Full
Of love
Full of life
I let go.
Mottled with lime
Leaf shadows
The lichen still moist
Far from summer sight
Less, least, a lease
Of season passing
Pass the seasoning
One egg
Not beaten
Broken in two
A bottomless bowl
Always open
So never
Full
Of love
Full of life
I let go.
Published 19th Jun 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 880
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
19th Jun 2015 11:14pm
a seasonal dish,
taken at the flood,
o'erwhelms us,
m'lud...
the defence rests...
(although in all seriousness,
your poem, unlike my drivel,
needs none..:)
taken at the flood,
o'erwhelms us,
m'lud...
the defence rests...
(although in all seriousness,
your poem, unlike my drivel,
needs none..:)
19th Jun 2015 11:24pm
20th Jun 2015 00:13am
Will you now receive in the opposite hand? A fine, thought provoking piece. Well done.
20th Jun 2015 10:19am
20th Jun 2015 4:28am
20th Jun 2015 10:20am
20th Jun 2015 5:41am
20th Jun 2015 10:21am
20th Jun 2015 5:24pm
20th Jun 2015 6:26am
20th Jun 2015 10:22am
Hey DPW - when I heard that bridge it screamed put to me to!!!
Glad u appreciated it
Glad u appreciated it
20th Jun 2015 8:29am
20th Jun 2015 10:23am
Anonymous
20th Jun 2015 8:48pm
oh whale, you do so leave me breathless when i finally understand something you're writing...
"Full
Of love
Full of life
I let go."
... i hear the secret's in the smoked paprika
"Full
Of love
Full of life
I let go."
... i hear the secret's in the smoked paprika
20th Jun 2015 9:02pm
20th Jun 2015 11:34pm
19th Jul 2016 10:32pm
The warmest feelings
surged through me
so beautiful, I wanted to
say :
"no, no don't lette go..
this reading cannot end
not right now!"
Just get so enraptured
of rare beauty.
-Howlings
surged through me
so beautiful, I wanted to
say :
"no, no don't lette go..
this reading cannot end
not right now!"
Just get so enraptured
of rare beauty.
-Howlings
