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Me Escondi En Mis Debilidades
I hide in my weaknesses,
I let the poison pierce my heart,
so that my voice may slumber
far away from what my true nature desires.
Snippets and trinkets,
Of useless emotion and thoughts,
escape from me.
My spirit entwined,
a black rose with thorns.
- Chai Tea
I let the poison pierce my heart,
so that my voice may slumber
far away from what my true nature desires.
Snippets and trinkets,
Of useless emotion and thoughts,
escape from me.
My spirit entwined,
a black rose with thorns.
- Chai Tea
Published 13th Jun 2015
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13th Jun 2015 5:21am
I love the way you expertly placed your words. If read aloud, it would sound quite beautiful.
14th Jun 2015 2:54am
Snippets and trinkets,
Of useless emotion and thoughts,
I TOTALLY agree with AG, your style makes me think of expertly arranged flowers and plants, Is that odd?
G
Of useless emotion and thoughts,
I TOTALLY agree with AG, your style makes me think of expertly arranged flowers and plants, Is that odd?
G
14th Jun 2015 2:59am
No it is not. My poems usually inspire my artwork or my artwork usually inspires my poems so there might very well be a few flowers in the creative process :)
