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Fall Out
Touch my heart.
Caress my love like a dying child.
Quiver with me so that we may dissipate like a falling star.
Caress my love like a dying child.
Quiver with me so that we may dissipate like a falling star.
Published 12th Jun 2015
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12th Jun 2015 12:15pm
A few lines but a very nice expression of thought. Not sure if 'dying child' is the image you want to go with but for some reason it seems to work here. Nice job!
