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Fantasy
Tender pain tantalizes,
soft leather agonizes.
Burning ice bites,
stinging wax delights.
With Cold iron's caress,
my body you posess.
This is my fantasy,
that your will sets me free.
soft leather agonizes.
Burning ice bites,
stinging wax delights.
With Cold iron's caress,
my body you posess.
This is my fantasy,
that your will sets me free.
Published 12th Jun 2015
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12th Jun 2015 12:13pm
Clever little set of words here. I like what you are saying and how you said it!
15th Jun 2015 2:30am
15th Jun 2015 2:39am
Well done, girl.
you need only visit the lair where fantasy becomes reality.
C.
you need only visit the lair where fantasy becomes reality.
C.
17th Jun 2015 5:59am
Thank you very much, Sir.
I have a strong feeling that I would never leave, should I find my way into said lair.
I have a strong feeling that I would never leave, should I find my way into said lair.
15th Mar 2016 11:24pm
I love how you can convey so much in the use of so few words....
Good write...
geoff
Good write...
geoff
16th Mar 2016 2:08am
Why thank you, Geoff. That's really sweet. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes its best to leave some room for imagination.
19th Mar 2016 9:22pm
Agony & ecstasy seem to play as if symphonic tango..like a violin bowed by a dagger....well written..SS
21st Mar 2016 4:11pm
A delight to read and imagine through your words. I enjoyed the sting of this. You really got it going girl. ;-)
John
John
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 1:22am
This lingers and burns....great ink
12th Aug 2016 2:16am
Aww, thank you! I really appreciate the compliment. Hopefully it gives you something to think about today ;)
Xo
Riot
Xo
Riot
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1st Feb 2024 1:47am
Thank you. It's actually one of my favorites. Just feels like it's got a really fun flow.
