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Sensual attack: P5/5 - sight (dark)
Eyes drawn firmly shut through fear of acknowledgment and recognition.
My imagination begging for input to help me through this.
The THING abusing me is not a man of flesh and blood but, but via power of will and wishing, it's something believable:
A dark figure ... Acting on primal instinct.
Talons finish of its deadly hands to a dangerous point.
A serpents tongue slips in and out its mouth willingly, tasting the fear in the air with delight.
But imagination fails and I see the face of -
My imagination begging for input to help me through this.
The THING abusing me is not a man of flesh and blood but, but via power of will and wishing, it's something believable:
A dark figure ... Acting on primal instinct.
Talons finish of its deadly hands to a dangerous point.
A serpents tongue slips in and out its mouth willingly, tasting the fear in the air with delight.
But imagination fails and I see the face of -
Published 10th Jun 2015
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12th Jun 2015 7:36pm
I love that last line! You leave the face to the reader's own imagination. That's much more effective. Great job!
12th Jun 2015 8:48pm
Crow I am so glad that you have understood the whole of the series and descovered along the way :D
Absalutly, I tried to make the attacker seem like a beast but I didn't want a face to be provided .... Its written from a PoV perspective to a grizzly effect I hope in some ways Hehe
Absalutly, I tried to make the attacker seem like a beast but I didn't want a face to be provided .... Its written from a PoV perspective to a grizzly effect I hope in some ways Hehe
16th Jun 2015 11:34pm
Don't really understand the "extreme content" label, but enjoyed reading, nonetheless
17th Jun 2015 1:16pm
Sorry its part of a 'rape' series so they were supposed to be read together, and as one they're extreem due to the themes
Thanks Creepy :3
Thanks Creepy :3
18th Jun 2015 10:48pm
Ohh, well, that makes sense. I'll definitely have to read up on them, sounds intriguing
19th Jun 2015 00:02am
Thanks, I cont put much thpggt into my own writing as I don't always like it, but I would appariciate that thanks :D
