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no prior engagement...
he shyly put his hand
upon her thigh
she smiled and murmured
what are you doing..?
at which he blushed
and said nothing
I'm free for the rest
of the day...
upon her thigh
she smiled and murmured
what are you doing..?
at which he blushed
and said nothing
I'm free for the rest
of the day...
Published 8th Jun 2015
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8th Jun 2015 11:17pm
I imagine his smile as boyishly charming. It brought a smile to my face :) Such a tiger he is.
9th Jun 2015 00:48am
if tigers blush, then I guess he is..:)
actually, does anything other than us..?
actually, does anything other than us..?
8th Jun 2015 11:24pm
9th Jun 2015 00:53am
I think perhaps slyly
would have been better in the
first line than shyly..:)
would have been better in the
first line than shyly..:)
9th Jun 2015 4:03am
I agree.
You are def a sly bloke, crafty
Nothing shy about you
Time for a edit !
You are def a sly bloke, crafty
Nothing shy about you
Time for a edit !
9th Jun 2015 12:51pm
but then some of my stuff is written purely
to entertain and is not autobiographical,
which is why some use "he" rather than "I".
I think fiction needn't be confined to prose..:)
to entertain and is not autobiographical,
which is why some use "he" rather than "I".
I think fiction needn't be confined to prose..:)
9th Jun 2015 1:44pm
9th Jun 2015 5:14am
9th Jun 2015 12:38pm
well none of us are bullet proof, so I think it's best
to divert the trigger finger for as long as possible..:)
to divert the trigger finger for as long as possible..:)
9th Jun 2015 8:59pm
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