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i wish your hands are burning
because i have seen your eyes in the morning
now you won't look at me
and if i can still feel you
you should have to feel me too
now you won't look at me
and if i can still feel you
you should have to feel me too
Published 8th Jun 2015
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8th Jun 2015 2:30pm
I think this poem makes an excellent poem in an excellent way. You have my personal thanks for not droning on.
9th Jun 2015 12:25pm
i agree with Zoe above, this has depths n layers in the words n spaces ..in a sequence, that gives a strong reasoning as you spell that ,"should" in l4. speaks lot to me, this piece. liked ur handling here
14th Jul 2015 3:45am
