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Feeling Unfounded, Dread Circumstantial
One night and one more story and I can't feel my brain.
Swallow me whole please, just so I don't have to feel.
I don't wish to ever feel this way again.
Hold me close while I hold still.
Hold on, stay strong, don't give up, I'm alone.
Hold up, stay given away, don't continue on. I'm surrounded.
But in people that don't care I'm drownin'.
Is this feeling unfounded?
Swallow me whole please, just so I don't have to feel.
I don't wish to ever feel this way again.
Hold me close while I hold still.
Hold on, stay strong, don't give up, I'm alone.
Hold up, stay given away, don't continue on. I'm surrounded.
But in people that don't care I'm drownin'.
Is this feeling unfounded?
Published 4th Jun 2015
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2nd Aug 2015 8:35am
Sweetheart, your words are put together beautifully. I am manic depressive. I understand. But darling, there will be days of joy, I promise. You are very talented though. Would love to see something happy, even if its about a favorite song, anything that makes your obviously deep heart beat. 💋
3rd Aug 2015 11:30pm
Thank you >////<
I'm so happy that you comment and say such nice things. Brightens my day!
I'm so happy that you comment and say such nice things. Brightens my day!
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 2:59pm
You take me back to times where I dread the next day. That helpless feeling that just nothing can possibly go right and the entire world knows it and is watching. Amazingly, the next day happens and that feeling goes. And no one was watching after all...
5th Aug 2015 5:57pm
