SENRYU ABSTRACT

Candycrier, luv ~ :-*

This is beautiful. And your formatting: flawless. You've managed to convey the stillness and the trees evoking them on the page visually... :-*

Brilliant maestro! :-*

I wasn't satisfied with this poem until I put in the last three words. That clicked it. Here is a human being facing the abysmal silence of the forest that makes him hear only his own ears. He craves opera--the loud thrilling splendor of human pageantry to counteract the silence torturing him. That's my interpretation anyway. That's the beauty of an abstract poem--offering many different meanings.

Thank you for your comments.