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Your Manc monologue;
Deep gutteral heart ache pain laced with wit and desirable disdain.
Aged like fine wine;
Just as charming, but, How long have you been unloveable, untouchable? Well, I say, it's not like those days anymore.
I'm just a young bird;
Lacking, childish, and failing. Though a devoted desciple I may be a tad crazy.
But, I swear, I've earned it, Baby.
Deep gutteral heart ache pain laced with wit and desirable disdain.
Aged like fine wine;
Just as charming, but, How long have you been unloveable, untouchable? Well, I say, it's not like those days anymore.
I'm just a young bird;
Lacking, childish, and failing. Though a devoted desciple I may be a tad crazy.
But, I swear, I've earned it, Baby.
Published 27th May 2011
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31st May 2011 6:46am
i have never really taken to the style that has ten or more words followed by two or three on the next line.
i have to say though it works well here.
"it works well here"
well done!
i have to say though it works well here.
"it works well here"
well done!
