THE ZOMBIE STROLL (Please provide feedback, I need to know)

THE ZOMBIE STROLL
 
The click up your arm or down your leg,
However the blood will flow
Looking for that perfect place
To do the Zombie Stroll

What I longed for yesterday
Achievements before I grow old
Have all become and so succumb
To the ghastly Zombie Stroll

Throughout the day into the night
However the heart may roll
Is given into the desires of
The beckoning Zombie Stroll

When all is said and morning comes
The crust yet still remains
And when the last of the guitar strums
Reveals the knife within your veins

With so much wisdom promised by
The drops of darkness grow
That slice of pie up in the sky
Became slow withering Zombie Stroll