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Memo
I didn't forget yesterday - you only remembered today
the promises you performed predicted pages of the past
News nobody notices – neglected noise nobody needs
Articulating arrogance audited to an absent audience
Will I remember tomorrow – to forget you one day
Tame tempers & teach thoughts to trace new timelines
Editing events eradicating every evidence, eventually
Metastasizing the memory merely to a moment to manage
the promises you performed predicted pages of the past
News nobody notices – neglected noise nobody needs
Articulating arrogance audited to an absent audience
Will I remember tomorrow – to forget you one day
Tame tempers & teach thoughts to trace new timelines
Editing events eradicating every evidence, eventually
Metastasizing the memory merely to a moment to manage
Published 24th May 2015
| Edited 16th Jul 2017
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24th May 2015 5:39am
the past prologues a pensive present, & travels toward a tremulous tomorrow.
well worded...
well worded...
24th May 2015 7:53am
lost my mojo and trying to spurn out something, but all feels like the same..notice you are not experiencing this and I still love your work.
25th May 2015 11:33pm
Ur alliterative barrage was both impressive
n full of depth, I liked it bunches :)
n full of depth, I liked it bunches :)
30th May 2015 11:26pm
10th Feb 2016 4:07am
"Will I remember tomorrow- to forget you one day
Tame tempers & teach thoughts to trace new timelines
Editing events eradicating every evidence,
eventually
Metastasizing the memory merely to a moment to manage"
Amazing stanza on its own, but an even better way to end such an elegant and we'll thought out poem. Really, really wish I had room to give you an RL spot.
Truly an amazing poem, cheers
Tame tempers & teach thoughts to trace new timelines
Editing events eradicating every evidence,
eventually
Metastasizing the memory merely to a moment to manage"
Amazing stanza on its own, but an even better way to end such an elegant and we'll thought out poem. Really, really wish I had room to give you an RL spot.
Truly an amazing poem, cheers
13th Feb 2016 3:14pm
well curtsy bow now forgive the ignorance RL spot? ok delayed - got it!!! Tks for the thought..
