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No To Lost
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Not sure
Why I
Bother
To think
To ponder
Then
To write
To edit
To re-edit
To post
To submit
All
To no avail;
The poem is lost
Forever lost
I am lost
Forever lost
I say,
No to lost
Being lost
Forever lost
No comment
No likes
No adding
No following
No wins
Not sure
Why I
Bother
To think
To ponder
Then
To write
To edit
To re-edit
To post
To submit
All
To no avail;
The poem is lost
Forever lost
I am lost
Forever lost
I say,
No to lost
Being lost
Forever lost
Published 21st May 2015
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21st May 2015 11:41pm
your words are never lost on me David... :)
never doubt your ability to write, to convey your point with words...
you did very well with this one...
never doubt your ability to write, to convey your point with words...
you did very well with this one...
22nd May 2015 1:05am
22nd May 2015 1:26am
the poem isn't lost,
just undiscovered -
and what's better
than being an
undiscovered
genius..?
well yeah, ok
there is that..:)
just undiscovered -
and what's better
than being an
undiscovered
genius..?
well yeah, ok
there is that..:)
22nd May 2015 2:04am
27th May 2015 2:44pm
how do you that? it's not complicated; not complexed - none of that monotonous, cliche blabber - but its so epic :)
27th May 2015 2:59pm
(lol) I'll take epic as a complement :-)
thanks for reading and understanding :-)
thanks for reading and understanding :-)
