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Rain (rain come again contest)
You, my dreamy - eyed rain,
are as free as a peacock's feather;
sometimes colourful and dazzling in
your transparent tears
and sometimes afraid of your own
little shadow.
are as free as a peacock's feather;
sometimes colourful and dazzling in
your transparent tears
and sometimes afraid of your own
little shadow.
Published 24th May 2011
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25th May 2011 7:47am
I am glad that you did it. The only thing I was not intending to disturb you is because of your studies and exams.
You have interpreted rain both romantically and emotionally over-here. I appreciate your effort.
You have interpreted rain both romantically and emotionally over-here. I appreciate your effort.
30th May 2011 5:51am
I do enjoy your work Olive and i can see you have gotten better and better and for that i envy you
22nd Jun 2011 11:56pm
28th Aug 2012 4:50am
wow the little shadow imagery, the beauty of a droplet not able to see its own shadow until nearing the final moment. don't know if you meant this but you inspired me !
28th Aug 2012 3:35pm
i didn't know what i was thinking when i wrote it. it was a rather random poem to be honest. Im glad it inspired you nevertheless!
thanks for your kind words and listing
thanks for your kind words and listing
