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Loving

Loving you was easy
You were loveable
Cute as a button
Pretty as a pitcher
Of pink lemonade
A smile so sexy
A body to die for
Witty and funny
Bright and smart
Skilled and talented
Loving you was easy
Because you were the one
My one and only
My soul mate
My fuck buddy
My angel on fire
My devil so cold
You were my everything
Loving you was easy
Because you said �Yes�
Been so long
Expecting NO
Not believing YES
Loving you was easy
You said you loved me too
Said I was your soul mate
Said I was the one
The one and only
You fuckin lied
You lied right in my face
You broke me for no
Apparent reason
Apart from fucking
It was easy to hate you
You�re a lying, no good
Filthy whore

Written by David_Macleod

(14397816)

Published 15th May 2015

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Re: Loving

Virginiapetal

15th May 2015 10:19pm

David, darling, so much angst in your writing today! Wish I could just give you a giant hug and make it all go away.

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David_Macleod (14397816)

16th May 2015 1:37am

that would be so welcome :-)

some days are days we wish would go away, sooner rather than later - then out of the blue comes an unexpected hug - and the day you wished away gently dissolves :-)

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Re: Loving

sammy4444

15th May 2015 11:12pm

It has always intrigued me how intensity of emotions are sometimes easier to sustain than quality of emotions. Love can turn to hate where friendship and respect can only be lost, melting into apathy and...loss of respect. Passion is passion and burns hot OR cold if not managed. This is a thought provoking piece of work for sure. Thanks for sharing, my friend.