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Since poetry is the art of saying that for which there are no words I find it very intriguing that you used a symbol for your title. Sometimes pain is simply too deep for words. Nice write!

men are right shite at playing hide & seek... i think they forget to come out when you give up.

This is epic..short n a slap of effective words in depth. Painful n wrenching piece. Tq fr this share, jemac:)

Ooh, I know what that's like. So incredibly painful and extremely tough to deal with! Short but slices through. Nicely expressed!

emotion, so much of it right here. some changes are easily detectable...

A poem like a blade. Murderous. Like it a lot, though.