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a sickly looking pallor...
she said I reminded her
of a mushroom...
but I never did, I didn't bring it up
all evening...
Published 11th May 2015
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11th May 2015 1:56am
11th May 2015 12:54pm
11th May 2015 8:04pm
from my lack of subtlety and decorum my last line to this may have been;
'She kept me in the dark and gave me shit'
Liked your poem much - I just wasted it :-)
'She kept me in the dark and gave me shit'
Liked your poem much - I just wasted it :-)
11th May 2015 10:34pm
