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Hide Me Hades
An All-seeing eye
Is fixed on me
Now is good to die
And in peace be
All i strive to win
All that heaven offers
Is blocked by my sin
Thus i must suffer
From the Lover
To the Punisher
For the unbeliever
Pain is crucial
Haven't i paid in full?
Restitution for my crime
Or is it simply cool
That i suffer for timeless times
Life i have forfeited
Hades i quest
Live on all the sinless
All i want is rest
Is fixed on me
Now is good to die
And in peace be
All i strive to win
All that heaven offers
Is blocked by my sin
Thus i must suffer
From the Lover
To the Punisher
For the unbeliever
Pain is crucial
Haven't i paid in full?
Restitution for my crime
Or is it simply cool
That i suffer for timeless times
Life i have forfeited
Hades i quest
Live on all the sinless
All i want is rest
Published 10th May 2015
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13th May 2015 2:11pm
Am I reading this right, that death is seen as relief from the "All-seeing eye"?
Interesting concept of a relationship with Hades being equated with rest.
Interesting concept of a relationship with Hades being equated with rest.
22nd May 2015 1:13pm
it is a simple reverse philosophy JAZZ,if life represents endless stress,then Hades must mean endless rest. but i might be wrong anyway,it is just a poem. thanks for chipping that in.
22nd May 2015 2:51pm
that explanation does seem plausible...like you I don't proclaim any knowledge with exact certainty. Thank you for stimulating those neurons in my brain!
