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perspective.
unrequited love is
bearable where there is hope,
but unrequited hope
where there is love,
is a dead end.
bearable where there is hope,
but unrequited hope
where there is love,
is a dead end.
Published 1st May 2015
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1st May 2015 11:19am
This is a brief but profound thought. I never really looked at it that way before. It explains a lot! Excellent write!
1st May 2015 2:42pm
It was definitely a brief profoundness that hit me in the middle of the night. I don't usually write short poems, but i see this as more of a life lesson. Thank you!
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2nd May 2015 4:55pm
I understand what you mean, to love is to have hope, definitely... it's possible though that love suffers so much trials and troubles that wear it down until the love is unconditional and caring but lacks the sparking hope for the fight, the ultimate reason for situational separations. It is the hope that comes back that stops that becoming a dead end... Food for thought yes :)
6th May 2015 2:07pm
"dead end" not more better words to put those many comatose dead ends in this journey, love. However transient or deliberated these deaths, proves confirmatory tests of hope n love might be...one perspective:) grt seeing u in brevity, tq fr this Celine x
