Knock,knock...Knock.

I LOVE this.  Ha!  Love.  

love is in the air :)

Nice write...

Enjoyed...

Thank you brother

Knock, knock.  Is that you Orlando? Knock three times if you remember :) This is a beautiful poem. :)

I can hear your music playing :)...thank you always Pishashee

Is this a joke?

knock-knock...

I hear ya knockin but I'm in the tub......doors open....LOL!!! Xo :)

Splish,splash :)

More times than I am comfortable to admit I have stood at that door knocking...hoping she cares, hoping she will answer. Wondering if she is hiding behind the door...waiting for me to leave.

This may not be the intended tone of your poem, but I feel this.

I like this a lot.

yes,wonder,love,hurt,pain...questions

this is why they've made doorbells with annoying chimes...
... harder to ignore than a knock laden with emotion

simply loved this, Mister Hash

ding-dong :) (love and peace)

I can't knock it..:)

I hear ya :)

a beautiful, loving poem Hashman...
love the analogy of knocking at the door...

open the door,will ya :) (thanks kate)

It is so nice!

Thank you Gabriella (peace)

to a small extent this reminds me of George Harrison's "Behind That Locked Door", the key difference is Harrison seems to be addressing negativity rather then indifference.

a truly enlightened being he was...thanks for reading brother (peace)

Sadly, it's relatable Mr Hash.  I don't think there's anyone out there who hasn't been on the other side of the door, knocking in vain, hoping to be heard.

"can't ya hear me knocking"... :)

this is amazing. sad, but just sad enough to be amazing  ♡