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Hot ashes
empty bottles
and tangled sheets
Wild eyes
crimson hair
and tiger stripes
Long, steamy nights
and discarded clothing
amidst December's foggy freeze
Memories
that left me cold
empty bottles
and tangled sheets
Wild eyes
crimson hair
and tiger stripes
Long, steamy nights
and discarded clothing
amidst December's foggy freeze
Memories
that left me cold
Published 18th Apr 2015
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18th Apr 2015 2:32am
18th Apr 2015 2:57am
Anonymous
18th Apr 2015 12:26pm
So sad, I hope you find true warmth to take that chill away.
18th Apr 2015 4:04pm
Anonymous
18th Apr 2015 12:57pm
Very sad. Being such a short poem though, I would replace the second "hot" with an alternate word like steamy, sauna, simmering, etc to get more bang for your buck.
18th Apr 2015 4:05pm
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