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Suicide
Take this noose,
tie it tight,
dont make it loose,
make it right,
Prepare to step,
take a breath,
nothing kept,
nothing left,
you step off,
and begin to choke,
start to cough,
about to croak,
your face goes red,
and begin to turn blue,
you think your dead,
but thats not true,
as you suffer,
you thought it would be fast,
you realize you were tougher,
but then at last you see your past,
slowly fading away,
you see a white light,
this is your last day,
you close your eyes....good night.
tie it tight,
dont make it loose,
make it right,
Prepare to step,
take a breath,
nothing kept,
nothing left,
you step off,
and begin to choke,
start to cough,
about to croak,
your face goes red,
and begin to turn blue,
you think your dead,
but thats not true,
as you suffer,
you thought it would be fast,
you realize you were tougher,
but then at last you see your past,
slowly fading away,
you see a white light,
this is your last day,
you close your eyes....good night.
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