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feelin' sexy
1.
Combustible; I clench your thigh
to bite on your lower lip
I feel so selfish around you. You're mine
and I want your damned tongue
all over me
(Before you disappear--)
2.
But baby, you make me want
to sell myself out and sprawl myself bare
on your empty page, to ride on
whatever mood you're in
Though I prefer you
wedge in me
(Sinking and rising--)
Burying me deeper
into this dream.
Written by
blackdahlia__
(belladonna)
Published 17th May 2011
| Edited 24th Nov 2011
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whoa
17th May 2011 1:20pm
re: whoa
18th May 2011 00:18am
re: re: whoa
12th Jun 2011 6:44am
oh my.
15th Jun 2011 8:05pm
This is definitely well written, and definitely hot. Wonderful use of words to get across something we all crave so intensely.
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re: oh my.
16th Jun 2011 2:20am
re: Hot
28th Aug 2011 12:55pm
Nice....
30th Sep 2011 5:08am
Short, to the point and sizzling. Great read and visual.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
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re: Nice....
30th Sep 2011 5:19am
I love this...
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Oct 2011 11:50am
26th Oct 2011 11:48am
Deffinatly my type of stuff...
Nitpicking I know but in 1. line 4 do you intend 'you're' or would 'your' work better?
I enjoyed that...smile...
Blue Skies -x-
Nitpicking I know but in 1. line 4 do you intend 'you're' or would 'your' work better?
I enjoyed that...smile...
Blue Skies -x-
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re: I love this...
Re. feelin' sexy
21st May 2018 7:31am