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Cake
cake
all over
my mouth,
hands and fingers
blue memories linger......
so mellow going down
buttery, golden layers
fluffy icing swirling
round and round and round...
you
are
to die for
and as my tongue
savors the taste of you
i want …...more
stirring your sweet, sticky batter
with my spoon, i begin to swoon
at the sound of your lusty echoes
explosive and wet
filling the room
craving another lick
from the tip
of my own “spoon”
just “for the love of you”
your texture
so damned smooth
a hint of
vanilla extract and
a shot of vermouth (yum)
cake
all over
my mouth,
hands and fingers
blue memories linger.....
….wanting you
all over
my mouth,
hands and fingers
blue memories linger......
so mellow going down
buttery, golden layers
fluffy icing swirling
round and round and round...
you
are
to die for
and as my tongue
savors the taste of you
i want …...more
stirring your sweet, sticky batter
with my spoon, i begin to swoon
at the sound of your lusty echoes
explosive and wet
filling the room
craving another lick
from the tip
of my own “spoon”
just “for the love of you”
your texture
so damned smooth
a hint of
vanilla extract and
a shot of vermouth (yum)
cake
all over
my mouth,
hands and fingers
blue memories linger.....
….wanting you
Published 6th Apr 2015
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6th Apr 2015 3:22pm
Loved the use of metaphor..
Tis to the memories of indulgent cake:)..
I'm hungry now
Tis to the memories of indulgent cake:)..
I'm hungry now
Mouth watering write ... You kinda lost me at vermouth until I checked and saw that there's an Italian Lemon Sponge Cake made with vermouth and custard ... Where or where in NYC though lol ...
Cool scribe.
Since I first commented on this - I gained ten pounds just looking for dessert shops in town ..
http://gothamist.com/2013/12/11/best_nyc_bakeries_dessert.php
Cool scribe.
Since I first commented on this - I gained ten pounds just looking for dessert shops in town ..
http://gothamist.com/2013/12/11/best_nyc_bakeries_dessert.php
