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they met at a door marked exit...
she said I don't know why I ever
went out with you...
he said you didn't go out with me -
we just happened to leave at the
same time...
went out with you...
he said you didn't go out with me -
we just happened to leave at the
same time...
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Re: they met at a door marked exit...
3rd Apr 2015 1:38am
What could one ever say about the door fame? I think of righteous rotations, take one step in and you're right back out and exiting left. This frame of reference is inviting. :)
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re: Re: they met at a door marked exit...
3rd Apr 2015 11:15am
Re: they met at a door marked exit...
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2015 3:19am
The question is, is every exit another entrance? :P
Cool write Dartford.
Cool write Dartford.
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3rd Apr 2015 11:17am
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3rd Apr 2015 3:44am
It's a rare thing, a poem that can simultaneously make you laugh and make you think.
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3rd Apr 2015 11:20am
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