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Alice, Come Back
She fell down the rabbit hole
Each time she came back
More and More pieces were missing
Until there was nothing left
Each time she came back
More and More pieces were missing
Until there was nothing left
Published 19th Mar 2015
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2015 1:23pm
I love the simplicity, it opens the reader to a wide range of meanings. Welcome to DUP :)
19th Mar 2015 1:53pm
I love the vastness of this! So many people can relate because it's meaning is left open for debate! Beautiful write.
19th Mar 2015 2:14pm
I guess I should have tea the comment above ^ looks like someone beat me to it lol ;)
