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His Hungry Lips (MIDNIGHT SNACK)
Voyeurism impaled
masturbation disdained
stroke my hunger
with the sharp tongue
of your blade
your beautiful lies
engraved
as love bites
tuned to my moans
plumed and looped
whispering
another man's name
with desperate gasps
gaze transfixed
at the reckless
defiant
lava
trickling
from soft limbs
tantalizing Web
pulsating in the night
from my fingertips
to his hungry lips
masturbation disdained
stroke my hunger
with the sharp tongue
of your blade
your beautiful lies
engraved
as love bites
tuned to my moans
plumed and looped
whispering
another man's name
with desperate gasps
gaze transfixed
at the reckless
defiant
lava
trickling
from soft limbs
tantalizing Web
pulsating in the night
from my fingertips
to his hungry lips
Published 18th Mar 2015
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2015 2:34am
Beautiful write, Lena.. a very hot ink..
Dave
Dave
19th Mar 2015 10:40pm
18th Mar 2015 2:38am
that's a lusty little dance you perform in the late hours; serving up creamy temptation from your fountain of earthly delights...
19th Mar 2015 10:43pm
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18th Mar 2015 1:23pm
19th Mar 2015 10:46pm
It's always good to work up an appetite. ..lol
Thanks so much for your support Poe
Thanks so much for your support Poe
19th Mar 2015 11:36pm
Dang Sexy Lena......I'm speechless....brilliant sexy write.....enjoyed xo :)
19th Mar 2015 11:46pm
Anonymous
20th Mar 2015 12:20pm
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20th Mar 2015 2:11pm
Hola Reks,
My first 'cold shower' comment!
Estoy muy contenta (I'm so happy)
Thank you ; )
My first 'cold shower' comment!
Estoy muy contenta (I'm so happy)
Thank you ; )
25th Mar 2015 11:59am
3rd Aug 2015 7:11pm
definitely great to indulge a hot ink like this... what a snack indeed... i enjoyed :D
4th Aug 2015 3:03pm
Anonymous
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18th Nov 2015 12:51pm
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19th Nov 2015 00:46am
Hi todski! Thank you so much for reading this piece and commenting . I've seen what you can do with your pen too ; )
22nd May 2017 5:28pm
Lena, your erotica is moving and so well composed. I can tell that you enjoy the beauty of the sexual experience. Brava! You make me want to write erotica again.
22nd May 2017 7:06pm
Wow what a compliment! I appreciate your visit. This was a lot of fun and while I haven't posted here in a while, it's still a lot of fun. I will bring some here soon.
22nd May 2017 8:08pm
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