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Sugar & Spice
I have the power
to surrender to my whims
and let go with command
shifting to constraints
of the curb, the yield
swaying with the currents
enjoying the journey
the fuck mind
of the charge;
the dare to steer
throwing glances back
while your shadow
shrinks
in the back hands
of time.
One day
you will see it my way,
enjoy while you can
if you can
swallowing pride
that women can dominate
bad ass wheels
with power and will.
The chrome, the steel
my fascination
obsession
since teen years
to indulge,
divulge
my body on the hot machine
the leather against my skin
masochistic
fixation
arousing
straddling the beast.
I ride
the hummmmzzz
the drumzzzzzzz
the squeezzzzzzz
between my thighs
throttle, shift
holding tight
on humps and bumps
blasting
past
your sneaky eyes
behind the
black shades.
Tell me
does my ass
speak
the unspeakable
while
you think,
the
unthinkable?
to surrender to my whims
and let go with command
shifting to constraints
of the curb, the yield
swaying with the currents
enjoying the journey
the fuck mind
of the charge;
the dare to steer
throwing glances back
while your shadow
shrinks
in the back hands
of time.
One day
you will see it my way,
enjoy while you can
if you can
swallowing pride
that women can dominate
bad ass wheels
with power and will.
The chrome, the steel
my fascination
obsession
since teen years
to indulge,
divulge
my body on the hot machine
the leather against my skin
masochistic
fixation
arousing
straddling the beast.
I ride
the hummmmzzz
the drumzzzzzzz
the squeezzzzzzz
between my thighs
throttle, shift
holding tight
on humps and bumps
blasting
past
your sneaky eyes
behind the
black shades.
Tell me
does my ass
speak
the unspeakable
while
you think,
the
unthinkable?
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Re: Sugar & Spice
4th Mar 2015 7:51pm
The chrome, the steel
my fascination
obsession
since teen years
to indulge,
divulge
my body on the hot machine
the leather against my skin
masochistic
fixation
arousing
straddling the beast.
oh great well thought out, not the meaning as such but more the layout, singular wording love it xD
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re: Re: Sugar & Spice
5th Mar 2015 5:55pm
Thank you Rose!
I know some of those words are your favorites...lol
I appreciate your comment mamacita ; )
I know some of those words are your favorites...lol
I appreciate your comment mamacita ; )
Re: Sugar & Spice
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Mar 2015 8:16pm
4th Mar 2015 8:14pm
Hot write, Lena.. nothing wrong with a woman who loves speed, and driving fast.. and also making the whole thing sexy.. beautiful and brilliant write.. this goes in my list.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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4th Mar 2015 9:08pm
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5th Mar 2015 6:08pm
Gabriel, thank you so much for that compliment!
You made me blush Mesieur ; )
You made me blush Mesieur ; )
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Why YES it does!! In fact I need you to let me get a much closer look lol... Hotness my dear!! :)
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5th Mar 2015 6:11pm
You crack me up Poe and thank you for the compliment.
I always wanted to try and ride a motorcycle without anyone being able to tell if I'm a girl or a guy, but the way I'm built, I've been told it's impossible.....lol
I always wanted to try and ride a motorcycle without anyone being able to tell if I'm a girl or a guy, but the way I'm built, I've been told it's impossible.....lol
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5th Mar 2015 2:22pm
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5th Mar 2015 6:27pm
OMG Reks, it's so great to see you!
I'm patiently waiting for your next sermon.
Lmaoooo! ... you just haven't missed a beat...you're right, don't peddle so fast, I don't wanna hurt nobody's son.
Get back to us soon ; )
I'm patiently waiting for your next sermon.
Lmaoooo! ... you just haven't missed a beat...you're right, don't peddle so fast, I don't wanna hurt nobody's son.
Get back to us soon ; )
Re: Sugar & Spice
5th Mar 2015 7:59pm
Echo Gabriel's comment on the last verses - one up on Bridget Jones' "Does my bum look big in this?"
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re: Re: Sugar & Spice
5th Mar 2015 8:20pm
Wow Solomon, I was debating on ending it with, "does my butt look fast?" in reference to the same.
Thank you so much and it's great to see you ; )
Thank you so much and it's great to see you ; )
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Anonymous
5th Mar 2015 8:05pm
Damn, this place is hot, sizzling..
fuck me boots, pink rims, sexy ass, badass attitude...:P
I"ll just quietly sneak out back to my page of subtle erotic metaphors lol
Well done Sistah!! You know how to do it ;)
fuck me boots, pink rims, sexy ass, badass attitude...:P
I"ll just quietly sneak out back to my page of subtle erotic metaphors lol
Well done Sistah!! You know how to do it ;)
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re: Re: Sugar & Spice
5th Mar 2015 8:28pm
LOL you are being too modest girl....subtle? a quien?
You cause trouble with your metaphors...hehe
Thank you mi hermana ; )
P.S. gotta check on Rose..(lol)
You cause trouble with your metaphors...hehe
Thank you mi hermana ; )
P.S. gotta check on Rose..(lol)
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7th Mar 2015 2:49am
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8th Mar 2015 8:41pm
D.ª Lena, esta pieza trae el calor. Su pasión por todas las cosas en la pantalla completa.
Usted sabe que yo no creo que lo impensable. Lo sé, y reclamarlo.
You know.
Usted sabe que yo no creo que lo impensable. Lo sé, y reclamarlo.
You know.
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re: Re: Sugar & Spice
Bienvenido de nuevo VP!
Eres un hombre inteligente....lol
Siempre me encanta tus comentarios porque me haces soreir ; )
Thank you for the RL add
Eres un hombre inteligente....lol
Siempre me encanta tus comentarios porque me haces soreir ; )
Thank you for the RL add
Re: Sugar & Spice
23rd Jun 2015 2:58pm
Lena-underneath, luv ~ :-*
This poem is so incredibly delectable. I truly must spend some time exploring your works, luv, for you are lushly evocative and almost unbearably scorching, but only in the very, very best of ways, luv. ;-*
I'll be savoring my incipient incineration at the point of your smoking pen, luv... ;-*
This poem is so incredibly delectable. I truly must spend some time exploring your works, luv, for you are lushly evocative and almost unbearably scorching, but only in the very, very best of ways, luv. ;-*
I'll be savoring my incipient incineration at the point of your smoking pen, luv... ;-*
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23rd Jun 2015 3:35pm
LOL WOW! "Incipient incineration"?
This is the most interesting comment I've received Ms Savaja!
It's an honor to have you read and comment.
Gracias mamacita ; )
This is the most interesting comment I've received Ms Savaja!
It's an honor to have you read and comment.
Gracias mamacita ; )
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23rd Jun 2015 5:05pm
Ahhh, luv ~ :-*
Tis my honor and privilege, indeed. ;-*
Ayyy, mija, tu...Mmm...muy caliente. ;-*
Ah, mi español es muy malo. Perdóname. ;-p
Tis my honor and privilege, indeed. ;-*
Ayyy, mija, tu...Mmm...muy caliente. ;-*
Ah, mi español es muy malo. Perdóname. ;-p
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23rd Jun 2015 6:59pm
lol....no worries, it was beautiful
and I wouldn't be much help because I always teach the bad words first ; )
and I wouldn't be much help because I always teach the bad words first ; )
Re. Sugar & Spice
15th Aug 2015 1:45pm
Sugar & spice and everything hotttt & nice.... your ink is magnificent Lena... stay sexy on wheels hehe ;)
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15th Aug 2015 1:56pm
Gracias Magic!
I will try to stay hot on my wheels and represent all the beautiful women riders too ; )
I will try to stay hot on my wheels and represent all the beautiful women riders too ; )