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before he learnt to kerb his inclination...*
he would recite his poems
on the pavement -
not a hugely inspiring topic,
of course...
*or: the cracks were already
beginning to appear...
on the pavement -
not a hugely inspiring topic,
of course...
*or: the cracks were already
beginning to appear...
Published 12th Mar 2015
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12th Mar 2015 10:39pm
You crack me up. :) Really though as his head hung low; this is an example of nice construction. I got a laugh out of it. :)
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14th Mar 2015 10:00pm
(As in Ode to a Pothole....perhaps? :p )
Chortles and chuckles with this one, mo Chara!
Chortles and chuckles with this one, mo Chara!
14th Mar 2015 11:35pm
