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Tell-Tale
Something about the anxious wait...
The wait between the tell-tale ding.
You wonder what the response will be.
Dream of your witty reply.
Sly attempt to make conversation,
Subtle innuendos laced through out.
Cloyingly enough
that first look
may cause a second!
Tell-tale smiles...
settled with a reply...
Awaiting again for the
tell-tale ding.........
The wait between the tell-tale ding.
You wonder what the response will be.
Dream of your witty reply.
Sly attempt to make conversation,
Subtle innuendos laced through out.
Cloyingly enough
that first look
may cause a second!
Tell-tale smiles...
settled with a reply...
Awaiting again for the
tell-tale ding.........
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Re: Tell-Tale
11th Mar 2015 11:43pm
Must be something in the air
seems. Like about the tenth piece I've read bout
a new possible relationship beginning...
congrats...
seems. Like about the tenth piece I've read bout
a new possible relationship beginning...
congrats...
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re: Re: Tell-Tale
12th Mar 2015 12:21pm
Interesting take on this...
Was actually referencing text conversations
and the fun anxiousness the good ones cause!! Thanks for the read and ink-love!
Was actually referencing text conversations
and the fun anxiousness the good ones cause!! Thanks for the read and ink-love!
Re: Tell-Tale
17th Mar 2015 5:25am
Awesome piece sweets!!
Pleasure too read and write!!!
You Go Baby, swinging that pen like that!!
Sir Lancelott
Pleasure too read and write!!!
You Go Baby, swinging that pen like that!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: Tell-Tale
31st Mar 2015 2:42am
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Re. Tell-Tale
16th Sep 2015 6:30am
Ah the trials and tribulations that go with courting! Then there is that link between communication in writing versus in person...
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Re. Tell-Tale
16th Sep 2015 7:45pm
Lol--sometimes its just nice to have unanticipated conversations!! Thanks for the comment.
Re. Tell-Tale
19th Oct 2015 8:13pm
I love this! Sometimes the waiting and no words, tells the whole story.
I miss your words Shell. You weren't kiddin' about not writing lately. Been uh, since March?! :)
Whenever you return to writing, I'll be here, soaking up your ink... Xo
I miss your words Shell. You weren't kiddin' about not writing lately. Been uh, since March?! :)
Whenever you return to writing, I'll be here, soaking up your ink... Xo
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Re: Re. Tell-Tale
19th Oct 2015 9:21pm
Awwww..thanks lady---getting the itch again so hopefully the writing will follow!
Re. Tell-Tale
Something about the anxious wait...
The wait between the tell-tale ding.
The spaces between stretch for hours when it's live.
You wonder what the response will be.
Dream of your witty reply.
How tight is your hold on the banter road?
Sly attempt to make conversation,
Subtle innuendos laced through out.
Baiting and hooking, second looking, hints enough in subtext to fill a book with
Cloyingly enough
that first look
may cause a second!
Every step unmentioned held in remembrance when the look remains like paintings by Rembrandt!
Tell-tale smiles...
settled with a reply...
Awaiting again for the
tell-tale ding.........
Oh. When it's on!
I dig it. The electric vibe is addicting.
The wait between the tell-tale ding.
The spaces between stretch for hours when it's live.
You wonder what the response will be.
Dream of your witty reply.
How tight is your hold on the banter road?
Sly attempt to make conversation,
Subtle innuendos laced through out.
Baiting and hooking, second looking, hints enough in subtext to fill a book with
Cloyingly enough
that first look
may cause a second!
Every step unmentioned held in remembrance when the look remains like paintings by Rembrandt!
Tell-tale smiles...
settled with a reply...
Awaiting again for the
tell-tale ding.........
Oh. When it's on!
I dig it. The electric vibe is addicting.
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26th Jan 2016 1:27pm
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Re: Re. Tell-Tale
28th Oct 2016 7:55pm
Well thank you sir--working to get out of the silent rut..it will come!! Appreciate your remembrance and comments!! Smiles!!