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of course, I'm always open to criticism, he told her...
he finally showed her his poems,
shyly explaining that he "just sort
of dashed them off..."
she said she thought they might possibly
benefit from a little judicious
re-reading...
that's fine, he agreed, read 'em
as often as you
like...
shyly explaining that he "just sort
of dashed them off..."
she said she thought they might possibly
benefit from a little judicious
re-reading...
that's fine, he agreed, read 'em
as often as you
like...
Published 11th Mar 2015
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11th Mar 2015 5:04pm
11th Mar 2015 6:47pm
oh I hope I'm funny..!
I mean I try to be funny,
but it's a funny thing,
being funny..:)
I mean I try to be funny,
but it's a funny thing,
being funny..:)
11th Mar 2015 5:25pm
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11th Mar 2015 11:21pm
14th Mar 2015 10:54pm
AHHhhh...shameless,tongue-in-cheek 'promo' for one's work--absolutely the v e r y best!!! :p
Paul, my friend,to fully appreciate your creatively clever talent...your wonderfully witty style, your poems deserve to be read---over, and over...again and again!
Thank you for all the enjoyment, and the smiles, and the laughter that you bring to the DU community....and especially to my realm! :) x
Paul, my friend,to fully appreciate your creatively clever talent...your wonderfully witty style, your poems deserve to be read---over, and over...again and again!
Thank you for all the enjoyment, and the smiles, and the laughter that you bring to the DU community....and especially to my realm! :) x
14th Mar 2015 11:32pm
