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Alone
I'm alone siting in a corner
I'm alone the lights flicker
I'm alone in the dark
I'm alone in the night
I'm alone with out fright
I'm alone with a knife
I'm alone on the floor
Im alone in the dark
Now there's a blood stain on the floor
I'm alone in the hospital
I'm alone in my grave
I'm alone for all eternity
I'm alone the lights flicker
I'm alone in the dark
I'm alone in the night
I'm alone with out fright
I'm alone with a knife
I'm alone on the floor
Im alone in the dark
Now there's a blood stain on the floor
I'm alone in the hospital
I'm alone in my grave
I'm alone for all eternity
Published 9th Mar 2015
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9th Mar 2015 5:56pm
9th Mar 2015 5:57pm
Well done with this...the repetition of 'I'm alone' gives it a nice rythum and hilights the desperation of the peice :D
9th Mar 2015 6:07pm
Wow this is.... Wow. No words. But except that this poem is amazing. I can feel and read the pain inside. It clearly shows...
9th Mar 2015 9:04pm
Aww I feel you're pain. Feeling alone is the absolute worse. I really like the repetition in this poem!
2nd Jul 2016 4:07pm
Dark & cold. No sense of anything positive. Drasticly desperate. Not a lot of depth in the verbal illustrations. Keep Grindin CAOS737
