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Is love
Delivered in a bag
Delivered as a pill
Is love supposed to be expensive?
Crushed into a powder
Arranged in a line
Is love supposed to be orderly?
Inhaled deeply
Inhaled short
Is love supposed to burn the insides of your nose?
Is love supposed to leave a thin trail of blood?
If this isn't love, then what is it?
If this isn't love, then what is?
If this isn't love, then what?
Published 4th Mar 2015
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4th Mar 2015 3:25pm
Clever parallel between the emotion
of a physical love n the drug addict causes one to believe
is love...
of a physical love n the drug addict causes one to believe
is love...
4th Mar 2015 4:52pm
4th Mar 2015 6:09pm
This is really good. I'm not a big fan of drug poems but trust me when I say, this is REALLY good!!!
4th Mar 2015 7:02pm
drug addiction is very physical
when Mr. Jones is around then
a hit of stuff is like making love
when Mr. Jones is around then
a hit of stuff is like making love
7th Mar 2015 1:14am
This poem is amazing. People come and go but substances are always there, even if you don't want them.
21st Mar 2015 4:26am
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2024 3:45am
22nd Mar 2015 1:27am
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20th Apr 2015 11:08pm
