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Death came for me: I,II,III
Sitting here, drinking wine,
Drinking wine, death came for me,
death came for me;
Yesterday, enfolded in gentle rain, as never before, ready to die, yesterday
Yesterday it came for me, yesterday;
Where now does freedom lie, beyond where
```~~~…Where beyond dust of bones eyes are crystallized…~~~```
Crystallized, she came for me, ready to die, we traveled light
Skin gone cold,
Strangely cold
```~~~…We do weep, we do weep…~~~```
```~~~…Lord; help our souls, for we do weep…~~~```
Crystal days, not long ago, solid and strong, barely more than this
This is the end, a lovely death, bow your head before being exotically limitless and free,
Free, free from man, and the wild wanting wilderness for her time and space
```~~~…Death comes in, I greet it kind…~~~```
Riding the ancient snake upon the mad kings crystal highway
Highway of life, highway of death, limitless void… The riders are done with their windings;
```~~~…This is it, this is the end, and they are here…~~~```
Winding down in the eternal ground
Drinking wine, death came for me,
death came for me;
Yesterday, enfolded in gentle rain, as never before, ready to die, yesterday
Yesterday it came for me, yesterday;
Where now does freedom lie, beyond where
```~~~…Where beyond dust of bones eyes are crystallized…~~~```
Crystallized, she came for me, ready to die, we traveled light
Skin gone cold,
Strangely cold
```~~~…We do weep, we do weep…~~~```
```~~~…Lord; help our souls, for we do weep…~~~```
Crystal days, not long ago, solid and strong, barely more than this
This is the end, a lovely death, bow your head before being exotically limitless and free,
Free, free from man, and the wild wanting wilderness for her time and space
```~~~…Death comes in, I greet it kind…~~~```
Riding the ancient snake upon the mad kings crystal highway
Highway of life, highway of death, limitless void… The riders are done with their windings;
```~~~…This is it, this is the end, and they are here…~~~```
Winding down in the eternal ground
Published 2nd Mar 2015
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2nd Mar 2015 4:02pm
2nd Apr 2015 5:31pm
Hello deepstink, thanks man, felt good writing this one... Sorry about the late reply, hows things goin: wolf
That ...
Wow...
I think for me, personally, this is the best I've read from you.
This is trance like... almost like a feeling of transcending to death... uuuhh, gave me goose flesh.... I DIG!!!
Darker.
Wow...
I think for me, personally, this is the best I've read from you.
This is trance like... almost like a feeling of transcending to death... uuuhh, gave me goose flesh.... I DIG!!!
Darker.
2nd Apr 2015 5:47pm
Darker; hows it goin my friend... sorry for the late reply, you know me though, I space out sometimes hehehe... This one, this one was fun to write... its written in a shadow style poetry, where the ending word of one sentence, has to be the beginning of he next sentence, or the beginning and the ending words must match... it can be kind of a challenge at times to stick with... This particular write, I was sittin here drinkin, just spacin out to Pink Floyd an the Doors, when those words came into my head, "Sitting here drinkin, death came for me, death came for me" and it stuck with me... Ended up writing this in 3 differnet perspectives really... But this write, it is written in the deads narrative really, it is written as one who is already dead, and recalling how yesterday, death came for me, not as a warmongering grim reaper, but as a old friend, then we leave together as friends... : wolf
3rd Mar 2015 5:18pm
2nd Apr 2015 5:33pm
Hello Stephanie; thanks, was a good one to write, sorry for late reply, how are you: deadwolf
