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Breathless Amusement
An airy explosion of fragile seams,
Downy white feathers blanketing dreams;
Melodious laughter, muffled screams,
Blunt barrages and hide-and-hit schemes.
Wiggling toes and blanket wraps,
Giddy squeals and forceful face taps;
Smothering victory, ensuring collapse,
Breathless amusement and now a hard-won nap.
Downy white feathers blanketing dreams;
Melodious laughter, muffled screams,
Blunt barrages and hide-and-hit schemes.
Wiggling toes and blanket wraps,
Giddy squeals and forceful face taps;
Smothering victory, ensuring collapse,
Breathless amusement and now a hard-won nap.
Published 24th Feb 2015
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2015 6:14pm
Beautiful write.. Brilliantly penned.. great job..
Dave
Dave
24th Feb 2015 6:30pm
this is a pleasant poem with vibrant imagery and emotion, Great job,
Cheers! Scot.
BTW, welcome to DUP . I hope you enjoy this forum, it is a great place to share and to grow.
Cheers! Scot.
BTW, welcome to DUP . I hope you enjoy this forum, it is a great place to share and to grow.
24th Feb 2015 6:36pm
Thank you. I've never been one to share my poetry, but recently returned to writing, so am giving it a shot, if for no other reason than to get it all out amongst like-minded folks.
I appreciate all the feedback, truly.
I appreciate all the feedback, truly.
Coralluna, this read was the perfect high for my day. It was playful, with wonderful rhyming, and filled with exuberance. This is the kind of poem which I love. I feel giddy and happy from your delightful words. ;-)
John
John
