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Been So Long
“Been so long, I can't remember when
I've been to Canaan and I want to go back again
Been so long, I'm living till then
'Cause I've been to Canaan and I won't rest until, I go back again........” Carole King
I lay my log upon her fire
and feel the heat once again
That sweet, sticky goodness
found inside this deepest sin
Slipping in between
the lips of her incendiary kiss
laced and deeply basted,
I am the the smoke
of her hypnotic fire
my dark mahogany wood
sizzles and hiss
….and I moan from deep within
delicious,oozing, hot juices
stirring and mixing
her bittersweet amaretto cream,
swollen member wedged deep inside
the sensuous, flowing curves
of her golden brown desire....
...the beauty of a most salacious queen
and her languished voice
sings to my soul
with each wanton thrust
giving into my needs,
relinquishing all control...
“...There's a howlin' at my window
I hear him closin' in
That green-eyed jackal's got the scent
Knows I'll let him in
he's got me slowly turnin'
And I'm basting on a bone
And I'm skewered like some drunken fool
In juices, all my own ”¹
…..roasting on the spit of love again ( Canaan, it's been so damned long..........)
( ¹ "Spit Of Love" by Bonnie Raitt)
Published 24th Feb 2015
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24th Feb 2015 6:39pm
inspiration on a snowy day.....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yGQl8HgTuNY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yGQl8HgTuNY
24th Feb 2015 8:55pm
Anonymous
24th Feb 2015 10:47pm
two things:
1. i love that bonnie raitt song. absolutely love that woman.
2. "and her languished voice
sings to my soul
with each wanton thrust
giving into my needs,
relinquishing all control..."
favorite stanza. but if this is a response to my 'be my chaser' you must have forgot the part where i get to call the shots! ;)
1. i love that bonnie raitt song. absolutely love that woman.
2. "and her languished voice
sings to my soul
with each wanton thrust
giving into my needs,
relinquishing all control..."
favorite stanza. but if this is a response to my 'be my chaser' you must have forgot the part where i get to call the shots! ;)
3rd Mar 2015 00:41am
25th Feb 2015 4:26am
Mr_Mahogany_Wood/MMM
I truly enjoyed reading your ink as usually. I'm glad you returned to your DU family. I can't wait until I too return on a regular basis. I look forward to the old times. ; )
I truly enjoyed reading your ink as usually. I'm glad you returned to your DU family. I can't wait until I too return on a regular basis. I look forward to the old times. ; )
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27th Feb 2015 11:15am
Maestro of Music, good to see you return! Good rising tide feeling on this. Steady control of the emotion.
3rd Mar 2015 00:43am
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