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Anonymous
11th May 2011 00:44am
I think you and I share a similar mind. I too was taken by the urge to use domestic and luxuriant imagery as a metaphor in my latest poem.
This is beautiful, like a truffle. The vague yet definite nature of the last line is perfect.
This is beautiful, like a truffle. The vague yet definite nature of the last line is perfect.
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Anonymous
11th May 2011 00:54am
I hate to be unoriginal, but I agree with Jack. This is simply beautiful. :]
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11th May 2011 4:23am
LA
11th May 2011 10:26am
It felt warm, quick and easy. I liked this, not too short or too long, just completely interesting.
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22nd May 2011 7:15pm
Can't believe I missed this one. It's got that eerie but almost divine quality of light to it that you'd see in a black and white photograph...not sure how that's captured in words, but it's stunning. I think your ability to make every word have presence is amazing.
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Lazy me
18th Jul 2011 6:59pm
I should probably read more of your poems.
Clinically warm and inviting, yet unapologetically cold and despairing. Great!
*quiet ripple of applause*
Clinically warm and inviting, yet unapologetically cold and despairing. Great!
*quiet ripple of applause*
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