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he was just about to ask the same question...
so he was looking for a job -
some bloke behind a desk asks him
what he can offer them...
he says I don't know, what's
the going rate..?
although to be honest, I thought
the idea was
that you'd be paying
me...
Published 21st Feb 2015
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21st Feb 2015 1:38am
Instant laugh upon reading that final stanza
I really enjoy your writing style
These short punchy sections each bearing weight in their simplicity
It's as honest as a workmates tired half joking comment over his overly watered down tea
Something to admire here personally
I definitely don't see enough short and simple poetry which actually has an effect purely through being so inane it becomes as catchy as a good hook in a song.
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I really enjoy your writing style
These short punchy sections each bearing weight in their simplicity
It's as honest as a workmates tired half joking comment over his overly watered down tea
Something to admire here personally
I definitely don't see enough short and simple poetry which actually has an effect purely through being so inane it becomes as catchy as a good hook in a song.
Loved it, subscribed
21st Feb 2015 10:32am
21st Feb 2015 6:19am
Another classic interview question: Tell me your weak points? ... (WTF) ... uh
... Let's see I drink
... I smoke weed so I may not pass any drug test ..,
... and even if I can switch the samples to pass the test - the drinking and smoking leads me to coming in late.
... Let's see I drink
... I smoke weed so I may not pass any drug test ..,
... and even if I can switch the samples to pass the test - the drinking and smoking leads me to coming in late.
21st Feb 2015 10:34am
21st Feb 2015 2:09pm
now,now, fellers....Boss'man
don'wana
hear that....wanna hear
only T'rue Lies
21st Feb 2015 5:30pm
22nd Feb 2015 8:04pm
22nd Feb 2015 11:18pm
Haha...reminded me of Bukowski's great novel, Factotum. Nice Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
